Added on: 29th May 2013, 11:21 PM

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29th May 2013, 11:21 PM
I'm not sure if this was really obvious, or this will be a surprise. I tried to make sure what she said wasn't too positive or negative, I wanted her to sound like she hadn't really considered there was a choice.

It was tempting to have a whole chapter or more with Annie with her natural body, but that would also mean her with no powers, and this was her first fight in a while considering when her suit was hacked. I think the story needs more stability before I should start shaking things up.

So just making this an event that brings up the idea that something could trigger her back seemed like a better fit for now.

So I'll probably save a story about low-power Annie for sometime later.

I also made some color changes to pages 109, 112 & 113, 121. Added shading to pages 110 and 130, and flipped the last panel horizontally on page 128.


30th May 2013, 7:17 AM
Another great looking page. I also actually like the way the story has been going on the last three pages. It's actually exciting.
3rd Jun 2013, 2:05 PM
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GREAT direction for this sequence to go in, and I LOVE the Status Quo-power effect.