Added on: August 15, 2013

Minty Fresh
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August 15, 2013
Lightfoot
Not sure what I think of this page, it's good or flawed.

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August 15, 2013
cattservant
Slightly rude,
But never
Misconstrued!
August 16, 2013
Grey Garou
She is hard to ignore completely, I would think.
October 18, 2013
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
I love how the compostions here leave the elephants in the room out of sight. Nicely framed.
October 19, 2013
Lightfoot
I've been considering changing it to this-
i.imgur.com/1U8CNQ7.jpg
November 29, 2018
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
I know it's 1,000 years later, and this likely no longer matters, but: I like the page as is.
December 6, 2018
Lightfoot
I'm not sure what to think now. This is one of a few pages I meant to replace certain panels, but I never did, and now I don't think I could imitate the art style of the time.

I certainly intend to add color to chapters 4 & 5, and fix any leftover typos or lettering problems- but some of these drawing changes are a more difficult problem. At this point, I could possibly justify redrawing the whole page, but then where would that stop?