Added on: October 17, 2013

The Next Few Hours...
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October 17, 2013
Lightfoot
This page wasn't in my original plans, but decided I needed something to display a lot of time passing.

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October 18, 2013
Grey Garou
Boy, she's going through her guinea pig tests. What are they exactly doing to her, anyway?
October 19, 2013
Lightfoot
In the first panel, they are taking her blood, and she has some kind of sensor in her mouth.

A full-body scan in panel two (maybe I need to make it more like a computer scanner effect were it's a line moving up or down).

In panel three to five she's swallowing a probe.
December 26, 2021
Hinoron
Oh! I did not actually realize that 3rd panel was a close-up of the glass she's drinking from in the next two panels. I thought that thing was lying on a mattress next to her thigh.
Maybe better zoomed out just a little, so a finger wrapped around the glass is identifiable, with a bit of fingernail? (As-is, the angle of the unidentifiable flesh-toned bit doesn't seem to align to any part of her hand).
January 10, 2022
Lightfoot
You're right, there are several flaws to the layout on this page.

I keep wondering if I should go back and slightly alter old pages that people seem confused about. Maybe I should.
March 12, 2022
Hinoron
That's one strong advantage of digital webcomics over printed paper;
there's never really a "too late" to fix anything. ;)