This is the longest time Annie has been in her non-super form since the beginning. I thought it was more dramatic to have her this way in a chapter about the risk of her possibly losing her increased powers.
Been very much enjoying the temp of this new chapter. It's been quite a joy to read how this arch has been developing. The dialog has been smart and humorous. It's really good to read your work again.
I've been worried this isn't a very exciting chapter and it's kind of dialog-heavy. But I felt like I needed to resolve or move forward a lot of things after the hiatus.
As a chapter ends and a new one starts, it's the best time for any suggestions or comments, if there's any ideas or feedback from anyone.
I've been worried this isn't a very exciting chapter and it's kind of dialog-heavy. But I felt like I needed to resolve or move forward a lot of things after the hiatus.
As a chapter ends and a new one starts, it's the best time for any suggestions or comments, if there's any ideas or feedback from anyone.