I felt like if you wanted to get Arim to laugh, the cheesier the jokes the better.
This is to try to give some insight into her, and the personality we saw in the early chapters were just her pretending to be who she thought she needed to be. Without Mira around, she's struggling to hide her real personality.
I saw on your Tumblr (but am unable to comment there) that someone claimed that Jessica Rabbit originated as a Tijuana Bible character. That person was mistaken: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Who_Censored_Roger_Rabbit%3F
Roger and Jessica Rabbit were created by Gary K. Wolf in his novel "Who Censored Roger Rabbit?"
My challenge eventually will be to also make Mira more likable without turning her into a different character.
I thought that a lot of these rookie superhero characters would start out with problems and then they'd work them out during the series.
Mira, Arim, and Evilyn started out as kind of the bad girls. If I wanted to change them, I thought I needed to remove Mira for a while. Arim and Evilyn would just change naturally without their leader. Then when Mira returns, the other two won't be able to change back- and Mira will be forced to change in some way too.
I also enjoy this story very much.
I remember a looonnng time ago, this was more eye candy-ish.
But it has grown a lot and I really enjoy the world and these characters.
Roger and Jessica Rabbit were created by Gary K. Wolf in his novel "Who Censored Roger Rabbit?"
I thought that a lot of these rookie superhero characters would start out with problems and then they'd work them out during the series.
Mira, Arim, and Evilyn started out as kind of the bad girls. If I wanted to change them, I thought I needed to remove Mira for a while. Arim and Evilyn would just change naturally without their leader. Then when Mira returns, the other two won't be able to change back- and Mira will be forced to change in some way too.
I also enjoy this story very much.
I remember a looonnng time ago, this was more eye candy-ish.
But it has grown a lot and I really enjoy the world and these characters.
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