Added on: August 30, 2018

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August 30, 2018
Hopefully this pace is going well. Trying to go quickly enough this isn't getting boring, but not too fast to bypass some of these complex details.

I feel like this story is still going uphill a little, and once it starts going downhill and lot of stuff will happen quickly. I'm trying to get a lot of the explanations done early, so I won't have to explain as much during the action.


August 31, 2018
I have to say that i'm either somewhat confused or a bit disturbed over the "ghost-abilities", because they were called teleportation, but at least Zoe's (i think it was) keeps appearing to be a variant of phasing, possibly paired with some form of super-speed, and NOT actual teleportation .... even though it would look like teleportation for those that cannot see them during the speed/phasing activation.
September 3, 2018
Grace is the ghost, Zoe is the shapeshifter (mimic).

Grace is meant to be a medium-low level teleporter. She needed to have something to fit into the ghost thing, and also some kind of see-able limitation. That lower-level versions of powers might be slightly different.

What I think is happening is that she's slightly shifting out of our dimension and when she's shifted she has some control over propelling herself, or letting our gravity control her (if she wants to fall downward).

Maybe in this universe a higher level teleporter can completely shift out of our dimension and teleport more cleanly? Along with teleporting larger objects and travelling hundreds of miles or more at a time.

Powers may scale in strange ways. Like low level flight powers might just allow someone to float in a controlled way without any ability to propel themselves in a direction, they might be able to fly slowly, or they could be a burst of flight then falling over and over.
September 14, 2018
Hm, i did not consider you had thought of how it works, and that that is how you portray it.
It is an interesting concept with limited ghosting that is combined with propelling oneself a notable distance in one direction.
August 31, 2018
Also, yes, i still like where the story is going thus far. ^_^