Added on: July 18, 2019

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July 18, 2019
Lightfoot
Lightfoot
I'm still trying to get Delphi's speech quite right, I edited her dialog in previous page a little. Not the meaning of what she said, but which words she used.
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July 21, 2019
Nutster
Nutster
If going for Shakespearean/King James English, "There thou art, my love!" (second person singular).
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July 26, 2019
Lightfoot
Lightfoot
Hmm, you're right. Her speech patterns are definitely not something I'm used to writing. I just wonder how much modern speech would be creeping into her?
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July 23, 2019
Deikon AL
I like it!

But Connor lost her in the battle, Delphi i mean....
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July 26, 2019
Lightfoot
Lightfoot
I wanted her to have a big bold personality, and for her to be happy. I thought that made it more tragic for her to be absent.
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July 23, 2019
Deikon AL
I like it!

But Connor lost her in the battle, Delphi i mean....
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