Added on: December 3, 2020

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December 3, 2020
Lightfoot
That Simon is such a smooth talker he knows how to keep the mood. But she did ask for bad news.

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December 3, 2020
Oh that's heavy to deal with out of the gate. But payback though will be sweet. It's good that she understands the whole in her logic. You have an artificial body plus you have a regular brain you are now more hackable then when you were just organic. Though I got to know how did hypnos know that arim and mira had weaknesses in the neck? It didnt seem that mira dad was a fan of hypnos. Though their mother was friendly enough.
December 8, 2020
Lightfoot
Hypnos was probably spying on everyone for a while using sleepwalkers. He probably knew about Mira and Arim's heads because when Mira's bodies gets really damaged, her head probably ejects.

It might not be that much of a secret that their bodies are disposable. It just didn't seem like there was an easy way to exploit it.
December 6, 2020
Whatever happened about the freezey robot. What was he up to? Was the robot dude looking for the creature?
December 8, 2020
Lightfoot
The one who froze Annie in the swimming pool?

I was going to explain him in the big Silver Dragon flashback, but I worried it was already going on too long and cut it.
December 8, 2020
Will we be seeing Thunderpunch again, or has his time in the story passed?
December 10, 2020
Lightfoot
He'll appear again. The current installment of Mira's narrative will end in a few pages so we can switch back to Annie. But when Mira's story returns he'll appear there.

He's important to the story, and was going to be important to arc two of the comic, but I changed things around more than once between chapter 11 and chapter 15. I thought I had too many open narratives and tried to combine as many as possible into the sleepwalker arc, then push everything that couldn't fit (like his story) ahead. I'm trying to stagger introducing more powerful characters until Annie and Tabitha are nearing their level, that's partially why Charlotte was only brought in so late. If Thunderpunch had been around, he couldn't have snuck around the city like everyone else, and he could have easily defeated Mira.

Thunderpunch is actually meant to be Lucy's love interest in the story.
December 10, 2020
Does that mean Lucy's gonna play a bigger part? Are finally gonna witness her power(s)?
December 11, 2020
Lightfoot
Her powers were meant to be revealed at the end of act 2, either in the original version, or with Hypnos, but I thought I had too many characters already. I doubt Lucy will ever be a superhero, her powers (whichever of the several options I choose) aren't useful or direct-able enough.